my poem
Hello fellow bloggers and today me and my class room 4 where doing Ako Hiko poetry slam and if you don't know then ill tell you. so first we had to go on the website and watch a video first and right after we were done we had to chose a link of what type of poem that we wanted to do, after that we do our poem on a slide or a google draw, we had to do two poems so we can put it on our blog. so here's my two poems that i did.
Tino pai Tupea. What amazing poems! I like the way you have made the robot have human-like characteristics like loneliness and isolation. And for the second poem I love how you've captured the vastness of space. Would you like to make a screencastify of you performing your poems?
ReplyDeleteHello Tupea,
ReplyDeleteI'm Maria and Im from your buddy class. I really enjoyed reading all your beautiful poems. Keep it up:)
- Maria
Morena Tupea My name's Justus from Owairaka district school,
ReplyDeleteI like your poems and how their wrote. I like the tree poem i think it is really peaceful cause it's nature Bye :).
hi Tupea,
ReplyDeleteim daisy from your buddy class.i really like your poems especially the left alone one.it really is beautiful .maybe you could complete the whole slide?
thx daisy
hi my name is luke next time put more discriptiv words
ReplyDeleteHi Tupea My name is Harry from paroa school,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem about a mars rover, Is the rover in the poem the Opportunity rover? I think how you captured isolation perfectly and the sad loneliness of the story made it a good poem. Keep up the good work.
Hello Tupea! How are you? I hope you are having a wonderful day today! It's Eden from Paroa School Whenua here! So my teacher, Miss Farr told us to write five comments on people who have done a poem. I think this poem is very good! Great job! Maybe next time you could make some of the poems rhyme? I know that not all poems rhyme but I think that it would be better like that. Overall this is an amazing blog post! Also just asking what poem was your favourite? bye, Thanks, Eden.
ReplyDeleteHi Tupea its Harry from paroa school again.
ReplyDeleteI like this poem about the stars and how it decribes the beautiful night sky. Did you know every direction you look there will be a star there you just might not be able to see it.
Kia ora Tupea i hope you are doing well now i read your poem i know more about stars, keep up the best work.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is jana I like how the poem lookd like it's rilly inchsting.
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ReplyDeleteHi Tupea,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Asmah. I go to Hay Park School and I am year 4. I really love the poem and I also love how you have added pictures to match. Some advice, Maybe next time you should do a kenning poem.
Have a nice day!
Byeeeee
-Asmah